Sponsorship email (in the works)

[Kowz]

Dear Affordablegameservers:

(1)DrK Gaming is a growing community that puts a new twist on today's gaming by unifying players from a multitude of games ranging from FPS to RTS and MMORPGs. (2)Our growing community is proposing a ventrilo sponsorship from our current 50 man server to a 200 man server. (3)We can provide advertising of your services to a large number of gamers that are in the top 10% of the games they play. (4)As a growing and popular cyber community in the wide spectrum of games played today online via PC, we influence a significant amount of the dedicated gamers today. (5)We can do better advertising of your services than you can get online by any other means through utilizing our contacts in today's most popular online gaming. (6)With our community members peeking at 200, we manage to have several gamers online at all times of the day. (7)Our community members influence their own field and time-frame of gamers; the early morning to the late night.

(8)We also understand you have stated you do not sponsor and we apologize for the inconvenience, but we do believe this benefits both parties.

(9)We hope to hear back from you soon.

DrK Gaming
Mark Hardesty

[Kowz]

Dear Affordablegameservers:

DrK Gaming is a growing community that puts a new twist on today's gaming by unifying players from a multitude of games ranging from FPS to RTS and MMORPGs. Our growing community is proposing a ventrilo sponsorship from our current 50 man server to a 200 man server. We can provide advertising of your services to a large number of gamers that are in the top 10% of the games they play. As a growing and popular cyber community in the wide spectrum of games played today online via PC, we influence a significant amount of the dedicated gamers today. We can do better advertising of your services than you can get online by any other means through utilizing our contacts in today's most popular online gaming. With our community members peeking at 200, we manage to have several gamers online at all times of the day. Our community members influence their own field and time-frame of gamers; the early morning to the late night.

We also understand you have stated you do not sponsor and we apologize for the inconvenience, but we do believe this benefits both parties.

We hope to hear back from you soon.

DrK Gaming
Mark Hardesty

[hax]

Peeking should be 'Peaking'

If you write letters like this, I recommend doing them in Word. Also have to parse them manually for random errors like that. Yes, it's 3:24am and I'm really burned out so there's no guarantee I found everything.

[freebeer]

how many words did you use a online Thesaurus for?